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Sample excerpts from real structural reports. Names and details anonymised.
These excerpts show format and depth. Full reports include additional sections based on tier.
Story Integrity Diagnostic™
Quick structural read on opening pages
- • Summary + priority order
- • Failure zone analysis
- • 3 action steps with reasoning
1-page diagnostic • 48hr delivery
View Tier 1 SampleFull Structural Edit
Complete 4-pillar manuscript assessment
- • Full summary + 4 priorities
- • Extended failure analysis
- • 5 action steps with reasoning
15-25 page report • 3-4 week delivery
View Tier 3 SampleEvery Report Includes
Structural Risk Level
Low, Moderate, or High assessment of overall manuscript integrity
Primary Failure Zone
Which of the 4 pillars needs attention first
Numbered Action Steps
What to change, why it matters, what success looks like
Revision Priority Order
Sequence your fixes for maximum efficiency
Structural Editing in Action
We change structure, not prose style. Here is what that looks like.
Converting summary into scene turn
After the battle, the soldiers rested. Days passed. They recovered from their wounds and prepared for the next fight. Eventually, word came that the enemy was moving again.
Kel had just closed his eyes when the runner arrived. "They're coming. Two hours, maybe less." His wounds hadn't closed. His sword arm still wouldn't grip. In two hours, he would fight again, or he would die. He forced himself to stand.
What changed structurally:
- •Summary replaced with immediate pressure
- •Rest denied (two hours, not days)
- •Physical limitation creates tension (arm won't grip)
Setting unchanged. Prose style unchanged. Only pacing compressed.
Sample excerpts show format and depth. Details anonymised.
This report addresses structural integrity. It does not provide line-level edits or proofreading.
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